Going Seperate Ways

Why was it left cold and bare?
when did we no longer care?
why was all the good forgot?
when did the fun that we shared stop?

The years ago that i can remember
all burnt down to an ember
fallen from this fiery whim
leaving nougt but ashes dim

Although it seems we should be glad
we still find reasons to be sad
splitting, going seperate ways
always presuming its just a phase

What if this one times real?
would parting now be ideal?
what if this split stays apart?
would it kill my aching heart?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 19, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Hi, I enjoyed reading this wonderfully touching poem that I can truly relate to. A heartfelt write. By the way, thanks for your comments on my work
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December 3, 2009 at 2:37 PM
If you love someone it will kill your aching heart and hers to let go,,good poem full of emotions--Charma
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