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Going Seperate Ways

Why was it left cold and bare? when did we no longer care? why was all the good forgot? when did the fun that we shared stop? The years ago that i can remember all burnt down to an ember fallen from this fiery whim leaving nougt but ashes dim Although it seems we should be glad we still find reasons to be sad splitting, going seperate ways always presuming its just a phase What if this one times real? would parting now be ideal? what if this split stays apart? would it kill my aching heart?

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Date: 1/19/2010 10:45:00 AM
Hi, I enjoyed reading this wonderfully touching poem that I can truly relate to. A heartfelt write. By the way, thanks for your comments on my work
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Date: 12/3/2009 2:37:00 PM
If you love someone it will kill your aching heart and hers to let go,,good poem full of emotions--Charma
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