Going Places

Going to Valeo
Hope I sure do grow
Going to Valeo
Hope my love will show
Going to Valeo
Don't really want to whine
Going to Valeo 
Bask in love divine!

(Valeo is a mental health center)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 10:11 PM
An interestng little write, Joshus. Not knowing your situation, I won't comment about the place, but I hope you are doing fine. Thanks for reading my poem and you gotta be a GREAT guy if you come from my beloved midwest homeland! LUv, andrea
Haick Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Josh, as long as you're going to be basking in love-good love go in peace and have lots some fun too. God bless, little Brother Peace, Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 6:59 AM
I hope you "do grow" when you go to Valeo, Joshua. It takes courage to admit you are receiving mental health treatment and I admire your enthusiasm to make your life better. Many of us have had counseling and help from mental health professionals from time to time, so we're all wishing you the best. Love, Carolyn
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January 26, 2010 at 11:28 PM
Is this true? Why? In any case, I do wish you well. But the way you wrote this, Valeo sounds like heaven. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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