Daver Austin Poet Haiku

Going Out-Of-It (Triple Haiku)

GOING OUT-OF-IT  (triple Haiku)

going out-of-it
where time looks back at you
eyes open    but shut

all life is stagnate
not a rustle in the trees
going out-of-it

yet    you are aware
going out-of-it    half-way
life is eternal

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James Marshall Goff May 9, 2010 at 7:28 PM Daver, I always enjoy your sense of freedom in your writes!....one of your fans! jamesy

Doris Culverhouse April 25, 2010 at 5:04 PM enjoyed reading today, thanks for your comments. You got what I was trying to do.

Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2010 at 10:18 AM you are so right , life expands to 2. enjoyed,..p.d

Faleshia Murphy April 25, 2010 at 9:27 AM very nice loved it hope you are enjoying your weekend faleshia

Skat A April 25, 2010 at 8:31 AM Good morning love the write enjoyed. Have your self a wonderful Sunday,,Irma

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2010 at 8:23 AM Please don't go out of it unless you are having an out-of-body experience, Daver. Then I would envy you! Great poem, my spooky friend. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2010 at 6:43 PM wow, I like how you finished this one up, enlightened, eh??

April 24, 2010 at 4:54 PM Much for the reader to ponder about in this poem. I really like the uplifting ending. I like the way you presented the pauses. Keep on writing!! Hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 24, 2010 at 3:13 PM A triple beauty too Daver and such lovely words of Haik .. life is eternal and very cherished ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick April 24, 2010 at 2:13 PM Great thoughts put to pen in this one...Keep the great writes flowing.. Have you read my write "Writing Me Softly With His Rhyme" ?Sara