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Black Eyed Susan

Going Green

Breathe in the sky, the
trees -mother nature is the 
spirit's remedy


7/20/11

Copyright © Black Eyed Susan | Year Posted 2011

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March 13, 2013 at 7:37 PM

Congrats, Sue. Excellent. Well done, my friend. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

March 13, 2013 at 6:17 PM

Susan, Congratulations with your wonderful winning poem in Sandy's contest~ always*LINDA

March 13, 2013 at 10:05 AM

Congrad's on your win in the Green contest, may Spring come early for you. Light & Love

July 30, 2011 at 11:42 PM

Mother nature is someone we all need. You can easily forget that where I live - New York's Lower East Side. Fine short poem! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

July 28, 2011 at 8:21 PM

Thanks so much for your kind comments I thought this might be of help to you it was to me. http://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist

July 24, 2011 at 2:25 PM

Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Susan. Hope your weekend's going great. Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2011 at 9:46 PM

Nice one I enjoyed It and have a nice day

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 23, 2011 at 8:15 PM

Congrats Susan on another stellar win with these entertaining words so lovely luv..

July 22, 2011 at 11:23 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, susan

Andrea Dietrich

July 22, 2011 at 11:09 AM

this is wonderful. A BIG congrats to you.

July 22, 2011 at 11:00 AM

Congrats on your big place win in freeman's contest.cheers

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 22, 2011 at 10:40 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in John Moses Freeman's contest "Power Of Observation" Susan. Love, Carol

July 22, 2011 at 8:46 AM

Susan, Also with graces provided, you did well in gracing the sponsor. Congratulations on your accomplished endeavor! Agape, Moses

July 21, 2011 at 5:40 AM

Such a remedy, for what ails one Susan. You got it. Agape, Moses

July 20, 2011 at 4:26 PM

very uplifting, helps remind me to appreciate!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 20, 2011 at 12:19 PM

awesome piece Susan.. we should all abide luv.. an intense write ...

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