Going For Pinktober

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A poem inspired by this October: A Breast Cancer Awareness Month.

Their murkiness has begun, an agony may follow, Yet, you can see their faint smiles with their eyes losing their glow; There’s a cap on their head concealing their sparse hair, Still, they don’t want to judge that life is so cruel and unfair. They’ve accepted the fact that anytime may happen, With this horrible disease which is also inherited from relatives and parent; With all their gumption and fortitude, they wear prayers and faith in heart, Strength in spirit to face the battle and trust God without a doubt. They bravely underwent several treatments on pains without complain, Knowing that some get streak of bad luck even from their environment; All they wanted to do when amelioration happens, Continue the struggle and show good examples to women. On month of Breast Cancer Awareness, they’re making a shout, Conducting the reveille for us all to keep abreast for the fight; They believe that we’re in a brink of prevention which is better than cure, If we avoid smoking and minimize alcohol to make our body safer for sure. Having a healthy lifestyle is still the best, Consumption of many fruits and vegetables and watch our diet, Positive mental outlook and regular exercise are very important, For a brighter tomorrow, against breast cancer- together we stand.
October 18, 2013 7.15 pm Note: This poem was written with the inspiration again of my cousin (now my 2nd poem dedicated to her ) and one of my colleagues. They’re both survivors of breast cancer. I lovingly dedicate also this poem to all our the breast cancer victims. First Place Contest: Pinktober Judged: 11/6/13 Sponsor: My Greatest Poet/all time Fave, Linda

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Date: 12/1/2013 8:16:00 AM
Dear Leonora - You express it well, the horror of it all. love, Kathy
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Date: 11/7/2013 10:27:00 PM
Leonora, , lovely impressive win................ SKAT:)
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Date: 11/6/2013 1:54:00 PM
Hello PINKTOBER, winning poet and beautiful sis and BBF LEO <3 Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~Linda
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Date: 11/5/2013 1:32:00 PM
a brillient tribute very well written thankyou for your kind words on mine xx davidscott
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Date: 11/5/2013 7:19:00 AM
Ohhh sweet Lenora,ur poem indeed is a great consolation to these victims....so sweet like u. Thanks for ur warm visit n kind comments,I really appreciate n missed u so much. Love u alwaz, Bob- based on belief
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Date: 11/4/2013 6:05:00 PM
I am a cancer survivor myself - I had colon cancer. Your poem is touching and I wish you snd yours good luck and health this wintern and beyond. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/3/2013 6:34:00 PM
A beautiful poem, an elegant tribute to those who know too much of this disease.
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Date: 11/3/2013 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Leonora...lovely.....
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Date: 11/2/2013 9:41:00 PM
such a lovely write for such a cruel disease...I lost my own mother to cancer, though not breast cancer it was a cancer that started in her uterus and I have seen her in the images you penned in this piece...glad your loved ones were survivors....great write! hugs :)
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:29:00 PM
PD will flip for this one. You are such an aware person, Leonora, and a very loving friend.
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Date: 10/21/2013 10:49:00 AM
Hello My sweetest sis..I just want you to know you are the best.... AND I AM ENJOYING THE BIRTHDAY PRESENT... SHOWING IT OFF.... ;-) HUGS... GIANT ONES..... POSTING A BLOG JUST FOR YOU... LOVE LOVE...LINDA
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Date: 10/19/2013 3:16:00 PM
Ps., Two Very Beautiful Favourites, And, I Love The Pinktober Title ˜ So Very Loving *
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Date: 10/19/2013 3:04:00 PM
† Another Heart Touching Verse, Sweet Beautiful Leonora ˜ Mist The Eyes In Countless Ways This World It's Time A Place; Yet As You Say, 'Faith,' Shall Hold Us Close One Day, Forevermore * Bless The Beast And The Children Yes, Kiss Their Precious Heart's ˜ Beautiful Poem And My Very Favourite Colour I Believe Is The Significance We Find Within The Many Shades Their, Pink ˜ Love, John
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Date: 10/19/2013 10:05:00 AM
so touching and inspiring, beautifully sad... a very nice tribute to all survivors of breast cancer. Thanks for sharing this my dear friend and good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:55:00 PM
A sad but beautiful tribute to all they endure.
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Date: 10/18/2013 12:22:00 PM
- This poem will touch many Leonora. - The fight for breast cancer is great, and fortunately does it profit. - Thank you for taking this forward in the light of day - important!! - Have a beautiful weekend dear friend. - Luck in contest !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2013 9:46:00 AM
Very heartfelt and touchy write on breast cancer with lovely dedication, Leo
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Date: 10/18/2013 8:27:00 AM
Leonora, stopping by your poem. How are you my sweet sis. I'm at work, commenting your poem from my phone. love the title. I'm only peeking a bit.lol.... I want to save this read for when my contest comes to a close. Glad you can write for the Pinktober contest. Like you I miss you, and wish our times weren't so different. I'll be back on my break. had me pancakes for breakfast mmmm :-)...luv . Linda
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Date: 10/18/2013 8:20:00 AM
I really love this incredible write on breast cancer awareness, prevention, and survival! I admire those that go through the hardships of breast cancer, when they come out victorious and full of vindication over the cancer! Your poem is very powerful and full of truth! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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