Going Down

With a great force she fell on the ground,
a terrible accident with horrible wounds.
I asked her what she was trying to do
and she told me softly - "The reason was you.
I thought I was able to touch the sky,
so being this naive I slipped from the height."
What exactly she meant I didn't quite know.
"Next time you should think more,
things are not always what they seem." - 
I said gently to her - my silly little dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 26, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Victoria, interesting dream. I just love one can dream with no limits. Consequences are even in dreams. Linda
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