Going Back In Time

As Cupid search hearts between spaces,
 Ardently compelling hearts to be fonder,
Like forces attract and unlike ones reject.

Unlike ones sometimes  regretfully cry out:
Alas, “Our chemistries don’t quite match”!
So on goes Cupid, next victim in mind. 

Backwards he draws that huge Bow of his,
Pointing a straight Arrow never to miss,
The tender  spot with an amorous shot.

One lover’s heart stirs as the Bow quivers,
The other experiencing chilly shivers;
Feelings mounting, thoughts embracing.

They walk through the garden sided by over-hanging
Trees, with shades and shadows blending
In the cool and luxurious breeze.

Thinking of each other among green blades of grass,
There reminiscing on passed moments they shared;
Smiling and tenderly looking at both moon and stars.

Now Cupid, patiently waiting drew back the Bow
Silently striking both hearts, a single shot,
Causing an outpour of love with passion divine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/11/2015 8:18:00 AM
I enjoyed your writing very much ... CayCay
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Date: 9/14/2015 11:18:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it CayCay. Appreciate the encouragement in your comment. Best wishes.
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