Gogyoka

The ice-man’s breath
teases flesh erect.
The wane sun delivers 
false promises
and soon hides again.

10/26/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 10, 2012 at 5:52 PM
Brittany, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD
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November 9, 2012 at 1:59 AM
Congratulations on another well deserved win Brittany xx
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Brittany. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 9:51 PM
This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Brittany.
Grisetti Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 4:13 PM
love the imagery here. congrats on your win.
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