Goethe's Path

Dense green forest, trees naturally stand in line,

Clear path enclosed amidst shows the way,
Kissing treetops only to filter sunshine,

His amazing creation is no child's play,



Bushes on either side adding to elegance,

Wind blows soft and creates ripples,
Lavender flowers galore, seducing fragrance,

Unending forest path, its beauty cripples,



Path unforgettable where love souls trespass,

Hands in hands, embrace to romantics' adore,
Appreciate everlasting beauty, can never surpass,

Incessant walk along, further crave to explore !




Written on 3/7/14
Contest- Goethe stanza
Sponsor- Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Hi Upma! You have done a pretty good job with this entry. Love the imagery, especially the seductive lavender. I too am wondering where this mysterious path leads to! gl in contest. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Thanks for lovely comments Paul ! Its unending ,, doesn't take u anywhere ,, going on n on ,, path of passion in a deep forest of life !
Richards Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 8:17 PM
Mmm......I can almost smell the fragrance of lavender!! Lovely.....and lovely poem!!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Thanks Carrie for ur ever encouraging words !
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