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Goethe's Path

The forest path meandered through the trees ahead the silvery tinkling sound of water there was also a murmuring drone of bees slowly slithering away was a sleepy adder Entering the pretty glade full of flowers his senses lulled by the peacefulness watching with joy the diving dippers and a kingfisher preening its feathers Onward through the leafy forest he strolled over on the right there were many fissures as breathing heavily he climbed up the wold arriving at the huts of the wood dwellers The high priest Druid Fire Dancer strode out shouting welcome, come sit here by the fire there roasting over the fire pit were trout people dancing to the sweet tunes of the lyre written 06/30/2014 contest Goethe Stanza

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Date: 7/6/2014 7:35:00 AM
Lovely imagery and sounds. Feels great to be outdoors where your write takes us. gl in contest. // paul
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Date: 7/2/2014 7:29:00 AM
This made me think of Nette's work, she is the queen of nature so that is a great compliment.
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Date: 7/1/2014 4:57:00 PM
the mythical feel of this piece shines for me, shadow.. love it.. huggs
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Date: 6/30/2014 6:51:00 PM
:) wow such beautiful images painted by your words.. :D and the last paragraph. wow!!!! you revive the enjoyable feeling of camping.. :D God bless.. :D
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