Goethe's Path

The forest path meandered through the trees

ahead the silvery tinkling sound of water
there was also a murmuring drone of bees

slowly slithering away was a sleepy adder



Entering the pretty glade full of flowers

his senses lulled by the peacefulness
watching with joy the diving dippers

and a kingfisher preening its feathers



Onward through the leafy forest he strolled

over on the right there were many fissures
as breathing heavily he climbed up the wold

arriving at the huts of the wood dwellers



The high priest Druid Fire Dancer strode out

shouting welcome, come sit here by the fire 
there roasting over the fire pit were trout

people dancing to the sweet tunes of the lyre


written 06/30/2014

contest Goethe Stanza
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 7:35 AM
Lovely imagery and sounds. Feels great to be outdoors where your write takes us. gl in contest. // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 7:29 AM
This made me think of Nette's work, she is the queen of nature so that is a great compliment.
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 4:57 PM
the mythical feel of this piece shines for me, shadow.. love it.. huggs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 6:51 PM
:) wow such beautiful images painted by your words.. :D and the last paragraph. wow!!!! you revive the enjoyable feeling of camping.. :D God bless.. :D
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