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Goethe's Path

I would not take this forest path unless to your angelic threshold gate it led. All life, indeed the air, I do confess is cherished, if your esteem they spread! I can conclude a single thing my dear I search for just your trail before me. The traces only of your sign it’s clear if I wander elsewhere, it does haunt me. A path void of your love, I shall regret for I may not relate to one but you. My destiny is twined in you and set, my solace only on a path to you. (Revised on 2/7/2014 after valuable suggestions from Roy Jerden)

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Date: 6/18/2018 4:34:00 PM
What a wonderful love poem! So glad you steered me here. Light & Love
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Date: 7/13/2014 11:57:00 AM
You are doing so awesome Mohan, Grats on another contest winner! :) big happy hugs!!
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Date: 7/12/2014 3:56:00 PM
spilling gold ink, mohan.. cheers to you for a well-deserved win!.. huggs
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/13/2014 12:40:00 AM
Thanks nette. I am learning from greater bards like you. Look forward to continued support. Mohan
Date: 7/12/2014 4:21:00 AM
Brilliant take on theme Mohan n a deserved big win! Huge congrats!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 10:10:00 AM
Upma, thanks for your support. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 8:20:00 PM
A love like this deserves to be returned in kind. Beautiful heartfelt walk through the entwining's of amore'. Congrats.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Robert for taking a walk along with me on the forest path. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 5:36:00 PM
Congrats Mohan...very touching
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/11/2014 6:39:00 PM
thanks David, I also congratulate you on your on lovely win. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 2:40:00 PM
Way to go Mohan! Congratulations!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/11/2014 6:11:00 PM
Roy, could not have made it without your esteemed guidance. all credit to you as well. thanks again my dear friend. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations Mohan. Love your take on this picture theme. Well done. // paul
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/11/2014 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Paul for your esteemed appreciation. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 12:58:00 PM
Lovely, Mohan...a worthy win. Congratulations.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/11/2014 6:42:00 PM
Faye, thanks for your valuable support as ever. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 12:05:00 PM
Wow! A different take to the theme! You gave one meaning of forest here! Very well done friend:) kudos!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/11/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thanks, Olive, my friend. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 10:33:00 AM
Congrats on a great win with this clever write, Mohan my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/11/2014 6:47:00 PM
Arlene, thanks for your continued encouragement. I cherish your support. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 10:31:00 AM
You go guy! Hard work always pays! Congrad's on your Win Light & Love
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/11/2014 6:49:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, your suggestions and support are always dear to me. Mohan
Date: 7/5/2014 8:36:00 AM
Hi there yes the Schema poem was very hard and harder yet not to seem contrived? Just think of it as a puzzle. YOU can do it! [Above I wouldn't use the word spoor because it sounds too much like she left dropping like an animal?] Light & Love
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/6/2014 11:32:00 AM
Debbie, I have now submitted my Rhyme Schema, pl. tell me if it is ok as I have not followed the 5 group rule strictly. Mohan
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/5/2014 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Debbie, I have replaced it by 'sign'. I'll try the schema again. Mohan
Date: 6/30/2014 7:35:00 PM
Good start, Mohan. There's a bit of choppiness and awkward phrasing here and there that could use some tweaking. Theme is straightforward. I feel the love.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 6:45:00 AM
Roy, have carried out few corrections.Hope it seems to flow now. Mohan
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:41:00 PM
Thanks Roy for the read and would reexamine. Your valuable specific suggestions would be appreciated. Mohan

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