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God's Treat

The oak tree stands tall with acorns falling to ground no chance to root now Squirrels run around gather nuts for winters feast life for life God's treat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2010 4:18:00 PM
Nature and God in one Haiku ... awesome.. we have lots of squirrels here in N.J. so I do watch them run around... and do their work for winter.... enjoyed Mac..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:35:00 PM
Interesting Choka that you have written here. Those squirrels can break the outter shell of that acorn and then it will sprout. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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