God's Treat

The oak tree stands tall 
with acorns falling to ground 
no chance to root now 

Squirrels run around 
gather nuts for winters feast 
life for life God's treat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Nature and God in one Haiku ... awesome.. we have lots of squirrels here in N.J. so I do watch them run around... and do their work for winter.... enjoyed Mac..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Interesting Choka that you have written here. Those squirrels can break the outter shell of that acorn and then it will sprout. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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