God's Take Versus Human's Logic

1st commandment "have no other god except me"
Should there be, He is impartial referee 

2nd commandment "do not make idols"
It simply makes the two seem equal

3rd commandment "take His name not in vain"
If thou shall make out of it gains 

4th commandment "remember the sabbath day and keep it holy"
 For him to make all the 6 days struggles wholly

5th commandment "honor your father and your mother"
Also the elders and that shouldn't make you a smother 

6th commandment "you shall not murder"
Like those before Corona herders

7th commandment "you shall not commit adultery"
Don't make it turn out to be your economic treasury 

8th commandment "you shall not steal"
The worst is trying the whole lifetime to conceal 

9th commandment "don't bear false witness against your neighbor"
Only God can help h/her with such labor 

10th commandment "you shall not covet"
Not even pieces of paper inside the ballot 

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11th commandment "follow your heart"
That's if you think it is smart. 

12th commandment "rethink with your genuine mind"
To know how worthy if the kvetch affined 

13th commandment "let go"
When at will, none is ready to burn down ego 

14th commandment "living with the tragic"
But no one dares hold you if you turned it a magic

15th commandment "saints also do sin"
The difference is that they learned how to give in

16th commandment is "walk in-out like a stranger"
You will sincerely be given respect like danger

17th commandment "no one is perfect"
Even pastors do misdirect

18th commandment "you should place a tag"
But don't dare try to brag

19th commandment "no one has ever return with heaven's video tape"
Not even a single audiotape 

 20th commandment "be empty of worrying"
After all, no one can tell of himself foreseeing...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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