Paul Schneiter Poet Rhyme

God's Route

Does it come from a distant lagoon,
Or is it born in the circuitry of my brain?
Perhaps it lives in a crater on the moon
And arrives on earth with summer rain.

Some never discover a celestial fact,
Disavowing faith in every fashion.
But hunches that help them safely act
May be a gift from a heavenly ration.

Some mock the Christ-sent Holy Spirit,
Considering His companionship infernal.
His voice is soft, but the faithful hear it
And the peace it imparts is eternal.

You are free to believe what you will
But of this truth you can be assured:
You will live life with consummate skill
By taking the route God has secured.

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Metitiri Miracle K February 9, 2015 at 10:37 AM Wow...am trilled Paul Schneiter March 10, 2015 at 7:36 AM Metitri: Thank you. Your comment has already brightened my day (and the sun isn't even up yet). Blessings.

Dorian Petersen Potter February 6, 2015 at 7:38 PM Beautiful pen Paul! Well done you've done an amazing job here. I enjoyed your piece, dear friend. A 7 from me! In His Light! :)Love n hugs! xxx D. Paul Schneiter February 6, 2015 at 9:07 PM Dorian, it's possible that you're too kind to me, but I love it! Your words of praise, coming as they do from you, never fail to lift my spirits. I couldn't be more grateful. Blessings!

Jaycee Cervenka February 6, 2015 at 5:45 PM This is a very nice faith write. You had very good rhyme flow and structure. I have to agree with your conclusion though. sometimes it's just harder to follow the path than others. Paul Schneiter February 6, 2015 at 6:17 PM Thank you, Janet, for your insightful comment. It reminds me of the old adage, "The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak." Blessings to you and your loved ones.