God's Plan

The wheat in the fields Bowing to the harvest wind It is time to reap

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/14/2010 7:23:00 PM

Times are changing, mother nature does he thing. Well written, Pal. Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 3:09:00 PM

Larry, if you haven't entered John's double-limerick contest, we still need four entries. I'm helping with the judging and I know you have a great sense of humor. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 3:08:00 PM

Fabulous use of imagery to convey the change of seasons, Larry. The reader can picture it so well through your words. Love, Carolyn

John Rhinem

Date: 8/14/2010 2:34:00 PM

Smile ~ Very nice poem my dear friend, if, one looks upon its colours from a point of mercies hands upon I would pray All of life....That a paradise and utopia would be given they, until the ends of all time wherein lies, no more sorrows death or tears; just happiness joy and love ~ "Much Love to You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Day;" Bye!:) ~

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/14/2010 2:15:00 PM

beautiful