God's Picnic



                 The skies filled bulbously with
                 gray-filled clouds.
                 We rested on God's daisy blanket,
                 laughing out loud.


                 Some nice fresh water from God's
                 own sink?
                 We laid back in utter joy, setting up 
                 glasses to catch such a blessed...
                 Heavenly drink.



                  September 24, 2019


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Date: 9/26/2019 7:15:00 AM
My FAV list. WOW!
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you for FAVINg this, Caren, PR
Date: 9/24/2019 7:43:00 PM
I love this unique take on picnics. So much more than merely 'playing the hand you're dealt'---this one is 4 Aces! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 9/25/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon. Four Aces ))))))) Panagiota
Date: 9/24/2019 2:07:00 PM
- What a wonderful picnic, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 2:13:00 PM
Hello,Anne-Lise. I agree. Daisies, a beautiful hill and God's water.)). Thank you. Panagiota
Date: 9/24/2019 1:27:00 PM
This is amazing poetry Pangiota mou, this is not a poem that should be ever be put aside - I printed your write and made it a bookmark. This shines beyond! Hugs my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/24/2019 2:11:00 PM
Jennifer mou You are just one impressive woman. I was just listening to music from Greece, then came to my iPad...and found your more than outstanding message. I do think at times I am the worst poet here. Then I meet up with a Poet of your heart and caliber and find I am not. I am finding out who my true backers and friends are. You are one, but of course. And I thank God for you. Love,Panagiota xxx
Date: 9/24/2019 10:25:00 AM
What a wonderful description of the God's picnic spot!! Exciting :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 10:46:00 AM
Hellooo again. Thank you. I think it sounds like a picnic with special meaning. Panagiota.xxx Thank you
Date: 9/24/2019 3:43:00 AM
We laid back in utter joy, setting up glasses to catch such a blessed... Heavenly drink.// it's beautiful poetic expression
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Date: 9/24/2019 6:07:00 AM
Mahtab! Do you know comments can brighten a poet's day. It's a kindness extended only by poets with gigantic heart, even to the humblest of poets. Many NEVER Comnent.Oh well. God sees what you and I do.And I do know the heart poets here, Love, Panagiotaxx
Date: 9/24/2019 1:18:00 AM
Awesome write, Panagiota… Blessings on you always
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/24/2019 6:09:00 AM
Gina, this was a such a fun write. I WOUKD love to have a picnic like that. Blessings...panagiota
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