God's Mistake

If we are old
Our time is cast
So younger lives
Should us outlast

But sometimes God
Gets it wrong
Instead of old
He takes the young
WIZDUMBs by JA 263
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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July 19, 2017 at 6:36 PM
Poignant little write, well done.
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