Matt Caliri Poet Acrostic

God's Milk In A Ball of Silk

Pure and plain like a plump white plum,
Evenness of color in a swirling euphoric fog.
Alchemy in a shell ready to sell for the chance of romance.
Round and rolling right out of Heaven's Chest.
Line, string, & loop 'round the neck that is your best.

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Benjamin Bartley May 27, 2024 at 6:06 PM Excellent acrostic. Best one I've seen yet. Way better than mine. So far. Matt Caliri May 28, 2024 at 4:22 PM Thanks! I credit it to all my Pearl Harbor visits...

Charlotte Puddifoot May 27, 2024 at 3:25 PM i like the internal rhyme and it was a good idea to write it as an acrostic, but just a heads up if it's for the pearl contest i think it has to be 10-20 lines..i've got three ideas for this contest but one's too erotic for this site lol Matt Caliri May 28, 2024 at 4:23 PM I know, I warned Craig in an email that I've submitted it under the line requirement, so I know it may or may not be placed. We shall see.

Kim Rodrigues May 27, 2024 at 2:09 PM So interesting, Matt! Unusual imagery! Love it. Matt Caliri May 28, 2024 at 4:23 PM Thanks!