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God's Masterpiece

The velvet red rose bows as you pass by It’s pedals wither as it concedes in envy Your soft rouge lips in shame it cries. Your Persian eyes hold amber flame No man resists the warmth inside No souls remain the same. Soft long hair shimmers with golden strands Invites the summer breeze to dance A whirlwind rages within itself To blow through the locks it finds romance. Skin of porcelain no blemish, no scars Gods masterpiece Gods Sun Gods heaven Gods Star. As angels sigh and lay at your feet For you are the one God lays down his brush His masterpiece done.

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Date: 5/11/2017 1:41:00 PM
Brilliant! The imagery is spot on, paints a truly beautiful picture in the reader's mind. I also liked the vocabulary you've used, hope to learn from your poetry!
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Vasudha Rohatgi
Date: 5/19/2017 2:12:00 PM
Wish you all the very best for your novel!
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Warren Clyde
Date: 5/12/2017 7:58:00 AM
Thank you so much...BTW love your stuff as well, keep it up so I can read some more... I will try to keep writing more poetry but trying to finish a novel at the mmoent so not much time on here lol

Book: Shattered Sighs