God's Masterpiece

The velvet red rose bows as you pass by
It’s pedals wither as it concedes in envy
Your soft rouge lips in shame it cries.

Your Persian eyes hold amber flame
No man resists the warmth inside
No souls remain the same.

Soft long hair shimmers with golden strands 
Invites the summer breeze to dance 
A whirlwind rages within itself 
To blow through the locks it finds romance. 

Skin of porcelain no blemish, no scars 
Gods masterpiece Gods Sun 
Gods heaven Gods Star. 
As angels sigh and lay at your feet  
For you are the one 
God lays down his brush 
His masterpiece done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rohatgi Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 1:41 PM
Brilliant! The imagery is spot on, paints a truly beautiful picture in the reader's mind. I also liked the vocabulary you've used, hope to learn from your poetry!
Rohatgi Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 2:12 PM
Wish you all the very best for your novel!
Clyde Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Thank you so much...BTW love your stuff as well, keep it up so I can read some more... I will try to keep writing more poetry but trying to finish a novel at the mmoent so not much time on here lol
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