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God's Gracious Butterfly

Go, go my dear butterfly On to the garden of flowers you go Don’t ever funk to flutter in wind 'll be watching your funny leaps. So gracious from flower to flower Gliding and swimming through the air Rather than flapping your little wings As an artist you turn and twist. Coming and going with ease and will In my garden you dance at thrill On the flowers you sit as still Until get full with honey that fill. Surfeit zest you bring my mind Buried in your flight I forgot mine Unto the sky and heaven I soar To the gracious God, my soul‘ll fly. Teach me dear this art of flying Else I lay buried under soil Raise me with your tiny drifts From hell to heaven I flit at will. Like loving God’s Gracious Butterfly Yonder sky, my dear soul, I will fly! (Meaning of my name: God's Gracious Butterfly) Won first place in What's In A Name Poetry Contest sponsored by Juliet Ligon

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Date: 4/2/2020 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your very well deserved win. I loved this poem and the imagery. Rashi
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 9:57:00 AM
Thank you again..
Date: 2/1/2020 7:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Jenish. Congrats on a well deserved top win.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/1/2020 8:22:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Line..
Date: 1/29/2020 10:52:00 PM
I love how you took me on a journey with the butterfly. Congrats on your top placement in my contest!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 11:50:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful contest and my placement.. Your contest was really a refresher..
Date: 1/28/2020 10:41:00 PM
What an epic name acrostic. You really maintained major focus there, my friend. Congrats to you on your high-ranking winner. Richly deserved! Cheers, Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/28/2020 10:47:00 PM
Jenish - God's Gracious Butterfly.. I'm flattered by your kind fluttering words.. Thank you..
Date: 1/13/2020 2:39:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this.... It's a blessing to be "God's gracious butterfly." God bless you. (Thanks likewise for my placement in your sponsored contest.)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/13/2020 2:59:00 AM
Thank you Beata for your kind words..
Date: 1/12/2020 11:54:00 AM
A lovely poem about one of Mother Nature's most beautiful creatures, Jenish. Uplifting and a delight to read. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/12/2020 10:53:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn for liking it and for your kind words..
Date: 1/9/2020 7:14:00 AM
Lovely tone and flow--as beautiful as the butterfly--Excellent write, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/9/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for inspiring comment..
Date: 1/9/2020 4:57:00 AM
The rhyming of this is only surpassed by the beauty of your words.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/9/2020 5:23:00 AM
Thank you Caren for your kind words..
Date: 1/8/2020 11:54:00 PM
such a beautiful write for a lovely name :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/8/2020 11:54:00 PM
Thank you Susan..

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