God's Gift

dawn
balmy, breezy
shining, shimmering, laughing
birds, flowers, color, fragrance
dimming, calming, falling
sleepy, restful
twilight
Copyright, November 7, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:20 PM
I love your diamante, Faye! Such serene imagery in a few words...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:56 AM
I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:19 AM
refreshing diamante worthy of a top win, faye.. my huge congrats!
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations Faye (love this diamante) on your win.
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Hi Faye, I love the comparison you chose for your Diamante and the create words you chose. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 11:51 PM
- A really wonderful diamond,Faye !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on your win Faye.
Callus Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Lovely imagery, Faye. Congrats on a top placed win. // paul
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 2:51 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your top win:-) Hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Very beautiful Faye. Two wonderful times.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:32 AM
Fabulous write Faye! Gl in contest!
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 5:37 PM
beautifully penned good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan x
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November 7, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Beautiful Diamante, Faye. The imagery is exquisite! This is indeed a winner! Pandita
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