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God's Eating Pumpkins

clouds brightly orange Flowing in slices they spread On the vast skies wide *Kid inspired *

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/9/2015 4:38:00 AM

Your descriptive is eloquent Njeri...I love how this was beautifully constructed...............A..M.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/16/2015 4:58:00 AM

Thank you alot Afolabi

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2015 10:59:00 PM

I like this very much. LINDA

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/16/2015 4:58:00 AM

Thank you alot Linda

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 10/7/2015 9:39:00 AM

Smiles...This is so much like something my son would have said as a child..pumpkin clouds. He has a fascination with sunsets.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/16/2015 4:52:00 AM

Lol i truly relate. thank you Jaycee.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/7/2015 9:06:00 AM

The title is good, the poem is good and put together, they are great. I love this bit of creativity. I wouldn't be surprised if this came to you while actually viewing an orange sunset. I know it will come to me the next time I see one ... CayCay

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/16/2015 4:50:00 AM

Yes it was a sunset moment..my lil inspiration was like "God's eating pumpkins for dinner"lol. And thats how the poem came about. Thank u CayCay

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 10/7/2015 7:34:00 AM

great depiction with a wild imagination

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/16/2015 4:48:00 AM

Thank you alot Lewis

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 7:23:00 AM

beautiful Njeri! :-) hugs Jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 10/16/2015 4:48:00 AM

Thank you alot Jan