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God's Eating Pumpkins

clouds brightly orange

Flowing in slices they spread

On the vast skies wide



*Kid inspired *

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Afolabi Muideen

October 9, 2015 at 4:38 AM

Your descriptive is eloquent Njeri...I love how this was beautifully constructed...............A..M.

Njeri Hunjeri

October 16, 2015 at 4:58 AM

Thank you alot Afolabi

Poet Destroyer A

October 8, 2015 at 10:59 PM

I like this very much. LINDA

Njeri Hunjeri

October 16, 2015 at 4:58 AM

Thank you alot Linda

Jaycee Cervenka

October 7, 2015 at 9:39 AM

Smiles...This is so much like something my son would have said as a child..pumpkin clouds. He has a fascination with sunsets.

Njeri Hunjeri

October 16, 2015 at 4:52 AM

Lol i truly relate. thank you Jaycee.

CayCay Godwin

October 7, 2015 at 9:06 AM

The title is good, the poem is good and put together, they are great. I love this bit of creativity. I wouldn't be surprised if this came to you while actually viewing an orange sunset. I know it will come to me the next time I see one ... CayCay

Njeri Hunjeri

October 16, 2015 at 4:50 AM

Yes it was a sunset moment..my lil inspiration was like "God's eating pumpkins for dinner"lol. And thats how the poem came about. Thank u CayCay