God's Blessing

The maple tree leaf
	Sheens of white upon them lay....
		Crystalline manna

Grass lying beneath
	Sticky to tennis shoe sole....
		small sounds as I walk

The diligent bee
	gathering, gathering, fast....
		Quiets at twilight.

INTERJECTION: 
Some would not return to the hive.  
Too heavy to fly,
too far to crawl.  
I’m sure they will die...


Inspired by a hive or hornets, deluging
a huge maple tree in my back yard, 
which was weeping sap from the leaves.


May 24 2010  For Rick's "Haiku You" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 6, 2010 at 5:29 PM
Interesting observation of the nature in your back yard.
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June 1, 2010 at 4:19 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative haiku series. Best wishes in the contest. Keep that creativity flowing. Karen
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June 1, 2010 at 2:16 AM
very lovely, brilliant work on all your Haiku+more, enjoyed,..p.d.
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