God Watches

god watches
As Saiten plots
As the earth turns 
As life blots

As feelings thrive 
As stars dive
As people wonder 
As dreams slumber

Be one in yourself
Be one in the same
Not one in a million
Not just a name

Stay true to your being 
That you should be seeing
Dwell in the best
And let the lord do the rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 9:13 PM
Nice thoughtful expressions, valerie
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August 5, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. a pleasure reading your creative poetry ..enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 7:44 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Valerie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Davis Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 3:39 AM
Lovey, sweet, touching poem… thank you Joanna Davis
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