God Is Good

Once driving home, I did defy
A deluge from the darkened sky.
The bluster lent a tinge of fright.
But God is good, and all is right.

When soon my house came into view,
Southward was cerulean blue.
And to the west an orb shone bright.
Oh, God is good, and all is right.

Voluminous the sun did rest
Upon a mountain gleaming lest
I look away; miss more delight!
But God is good, and all is right.

For where the azure sky met gray,
A rainbow over my house lay.
With peaks to east it did unite.
Oh, God is good, and all is right.

This finite sight I need to store
Inside my mind; when troubles pour,
I'll think on it. And so I write
My God is good, and all is right

For Giorgio Veneto's Beloved Poem Contest
By Andrea Dietrich in Rhyme form. I suppose 
you could say Couplets but they are couplets 
inside quatrain type stanzas, so I am just calling
it rhyme.

*This is a beloved poem of mine for the simple reason that it
was one of those rare poems truly inspired by reality. A lot 
of my poems are based on pictures or challenges or things
I see in movies or simply from my playing with words. This actually
happened to me. I had just begun writing poetry in my life, and these 
words were going through my head as I beheld the beautiful
rainbow that signaled the end of the frightening storm! When 
I reached my home, I immediately began jotting down the words!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/29/2020 1:00:00 AM
Andrea, I love it! Amen to all of it, especially the last quatrain. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win....
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Date: 9/29/2013 11:28:00 AM
Way to go, Andrea. Outstanding. Well done. luv, Ralph
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Date: 9/28/2013 8:40:00 PM
what a lovely poem you have crafted from your experience...good you made it safely and were able to jot it all down...awesome write :) congrats on your win....hugs
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Andrea Dietrich
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Linda
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:49:00 PM
I mean.. Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/28/2013 1:57:00 PM
Andrea, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:31:00 AM
I meant to tell you why it is! I was driving home once from Julian , scarred to San Diego, very curvy , dangerous road up the mountain , brings back many rides home and the anxiety.
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations , this is a great win !
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Date: 9/28/2013 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. This is so wonderfully expressed. I deeply felt the fear as it changed into the calmness when you reached your sanctuary 'home'... It's apparent that you deeply felt this experience :)
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:33:00 AM
I remember one night in December driving home in a terrible storm by myself......fog, and then light snow, I could hardly see a thing......the radio was playing parts of Handel's "Messiah"........ this poem reminded me of that........how holding on to the warm thought of home, and how much it truly means....."God...please help me make it home".......!! And he did ! :)
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Date: 9/28/2013 3:54:00 AM
Wonderful piece,Andrea...Really unique ...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:42:00 PM
Andrea, , Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 10/7/2012 9:41:00 AM
I love this Andrea! Congrats on your win! This is going in my favs. Love, Kim
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Date: 10/6/2012 9:34:00 AM
Beautifully penned,Andrea.Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:55:00 PM
"MY GOD IS GOOD AND ALL IS RIGHT". A sentiment I embrace. A wonderfully written piece Andrea. Thanks for your lovely entry. Congrats on a fine win. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:46:00 PM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON A REMARKABLE WRITE MY FRIEND AND WELL DESERVED WIN ..
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:08:00 PM
Very descriptive work..I like the colsors used..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea! You have not commented on my Constanza poem. I will deeply appreciate your opinion about the poem. Thanks always for your willingness to help.
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:08:00 AM
ANDREA, congratulations with your awesome "Weather Forecast" poem in Joy's contest... have yourself a good day :-) Love PD
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:55:00 AM
Belated congratulations once again, I am sorry these are late I am busy packing and shopping for my holidays xx
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:41:00 AM
beautiful poem Andrea....congrats on your win
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joy's "Weather Forecast" contest Andrea. Love Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Andrea!!! love and hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/5/2012 3:34:00 AM
I love your take on the contest Andie. A wonderful entry and congratulations on your outstanding win!
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