God Is Gold

With hands held high, To heaven I will fly,

With God's angels by my side, 

Shed nomore tears, Please don't cry,

The devil is faceless, He has no smile,

He remains without my soul,

 Death on his life will take it's toll,

His heart as black as coal, 

He is to remain in his firey dark hole,

 I stay with God, and God Is gold.

ScottS2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fringe Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Perhaps I'm the devil. I hope not because I won't like it in a dark hole. haha just kidding. I agree that the power of God is amazing. Good write again Scott.
Wellington Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 8:07 AM
Welcome brother, you have started on the right foot. One love. Joy (Jew)
Skaggs Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 10:22 AM
I Tried pretty hard on this one, hope you like it
Mister Roboto Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 10:00 AM
almost forget --- 7up Rate!
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May 30, 2011 at 10:01 AM
Almost forgOt...I will forward this poem to many of my friends if you do not mind. I find it to be very nice.
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May 30, 2011 at 9:59 AM
Perfect. You have done well with your revision, and for that a SEVEN is yours. Take your time with the word on the revisions. I know they come out very fast when the Creative Act is being done originally. If you make proper edits, I promise your work will be heavily endeared. Keep up the excellent work. And again, welcome to Poetry Soup. There are many people here who want you to succeed. ~JSLambert Esquire
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May 30, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Nice story. Welcome to the soup. Go back and read it before I rate it. There are a few small errors which will be no problem to correct. I will gladly give it a 7 upon further examination. Besides SEVEN is for God. ~JSLambert Esquire
Jones Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Thats really qood. Keep on writing. (: -Porsha
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May 30, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Scott welcome to soup..This is the site to learn much about poetry which I hope that you will enjoy..Soup mail..Sara
Mcafee Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 7:34 AM
Inspirational indeed...Excellent!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your inspirational and creative message .. truth be told .. God is Gold.. hope u enjoy the site as u continue to share your words with luv..
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