Parivartana Singh Poet Romanticism

God Himself

light has always reminding me about truths...
hope z always dere in my heart...
makin my own destiny lyk sm odrs..
n a man who z god himself n my world impart..
 
a man who forgives my mistakes..
a man who gives me a protective delf..
a man who selflesly allocates..
a man who z god himself..
 
nthin cn break his promises..
a surity which cn be seen in his face..
nthin cn touch his goal n tame it..
becoz he hs faith on me n it wl brace..
 
smone who dnt take wrong decisions..
becoz things breakdown if u dnt care of a shelf..
smone who wnts to c odrs hapynes..
becoz he know the priority of god himself..
 
love pari

if u liked d poem or evn if u hate it..plz gv me ur feedback through ur cmnts..i wl apreciate it..

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Richard Lamoureux November 20, 2013 at 2:47 PM Despite lack of English language skills you still manage to be eloquent with your message and imagery. Parivartana Singh November 28, 2013 at 2:48 PM Yeah...I'm wrkin on my english skils...fingr crosd. :)

Bidhu Patnaik June 22, 2013 at 4:53 AM Very unique but so filled with beautifully woven words. Yours expressions are pure and elegant and I will keep on reading your poems..feels great. Parivartana Singh June 22, 2013 at 5:03 AM thnx a lot sean.. thnx for givin me ur fedbck...u cn chck out mine odrs too :) :)

Sean L Sanders June 22, 2013 at 4:23 AM I liked the poem I didn't like the way you spelled certain letters maybe you wanted to be different if that's the case don't be your writing doesn't need it. Great poem poet. Very beautiful Parivartana Singh June 22, 2013 at 5:04 AM thnx a lot sean.. thnx for givin me ur fedbck...u cn chck out mine odrs too :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 21, 2013 at 2:47 AM - A beautiful poem, written with loving words and consideration. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Parivartana Singh June 21, 2013 at 2:51 AM thnx anne...hope dt god wl listn to me.. :P :P

Shiraz Iqbal June 21, 2013 at 2:41 AM Interesting way of dealing with the concept.Its a beautiful piece keep writing Lots of love - Shiraz Parivartana Singh June 21, 2013 at 2:50 AM thnx shiraz....keep postin :) :)