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God Himself

light has always reminding me about truths... hope z always dere in my heart... makin my own destiny lyk sm odrs.. n a man who z god himself n my world impart.. a man who forgives my mistakes.. a man who gives me a protective delf.. a man who selflesly allocates.. a man who z god himself.. nthin cn break his promises.. a surity which cn be seen in his face.. nthin cn touch his goal n tame it.. becoz he hs faith on me n it wl brace.. smone who dnt take wrong decisions.. becoz things breakdown if u dnt care of a shelf.. smone who wnts to c odrs hapynes.. becoz he know the priority of god himself.. love pari if u liked d poem or evn if u hate it..plz gv me ur feedback through ur cmnts..i wl apreciate it..

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/20/2013 2:47:00 PM

Despite lack of English language skills you still manage to be eloquent with your message and imagery.

Parivartana Singh
Date: 11/28/2013 2:48:00 PM

Yeah...I'm wrkin on my english skils...fingr crosd. :)

Bidhu Patnaik

Date: 6/22/2013 4:53:00 AM

Very unique but so filled with beautifully woven words. Yours expressions are pure and elegant and I will keep on reading your poems..feels great.

Parivartana Singh
Date: 6/22/2013 5:03:00 AM

thnx a lot sean.. thnx for givin me ur fedbck...u cn chck out mine odrs too :) :)

Sean L Sanders

Date: 6/22/2013 4:23:00 AM

I liked the poem I didn't like the way you spelled certain letters maybe you wanted to be different if that's the case don't be your writing doesn't need it. Great poem poet. Very beautiful

Parivartana Singh
Date: 6/22/2013 5:04:00 AM

thnx a lot sean.. thnx for givin me ur fedbck...u cn chck out mine odrs too :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/21/2013 2:47:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, written with loving words and consideration. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Parivartana Singh
Date: 6/21/2013 2:51:00 AM

thnx anne...hope dt god wl listn to me.. :P :P

Shiraz Iqbal

Date: 6/21/2013 2:41:00 AM

Interesting way of dealing with the concept.Its a beautiful piece keep writing Lots of love - Shiraz

Parivartana Singh
Date: 6/21/2013 2:50:00 AM

thnx shiraz....keep postin :) :)