God Bursts Everywhere

I wonder what is it , that shows its presence , all the time , in all the acts and in all the thoughts.
I get up to see the sun , feel the breeze and hear the chirps , that make me happy.
I wonder who is it who make me think , speak , hear , feel , smell , see , hate-like and smile or cry.
I meet people to ask who is it interfering in everything to make things happen.
I wonder how do intuitions work, how one looses memory and regains , sometimes without efforts.
I ask again and again the secrets of intelligence and foolishness of course.
I wonder who is there above the clouds and under oceans , who secretly knows everything.
Seeds sprout , flowers bloom , livings die or take birth , oceans sustain water and even in "Kaliyug" goodness exists.
I’m not sure whether it is some science, logic , superstition or the Divine, who all the time bursts everywhere.

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Date: 1/14/2014 11:40:00 PM
Hi Archana, very nice reflections demonstrated in poetic language. Many people do not stop to think about these things, but ever so often times I myself ask these questions. This is a nice poem.
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Archana Garg
Date: 1/16/2014 3:29:00 AM
Hi, Christine --- God to me is the ultimate truth. Many of my experiences have made me realize His presence // Thanks for your support and praise. :))
Date: 1/13/2014 1:31:00 AM
Hi, Very nice and beautifully written poem.
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Archana Garg
Date: 1/13/2014 1:35:00 AM
Thanks dear.
Date: 1/8/2014 1:42:00 AM
Beautifully written. Touches the chords of the heart.
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Archana Garg
Date: 1/11/2014 11:18:00 AM
Thanks for you gave your precious time to my work.
Date: 1/7/2014 4:05:00 PM
Very thoughtfully written. We all ask the same old questions in different ways. See my poem, "Are There Answers?"
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Archana Garg
Date: 1/11/2014 11:16:00 AM
It was wonderful experience to read "Are There Answers"... THANKS
Date: 1/7/2014 2:31:00 PM
THIS POEM SAYS ALOT WITHIN IT'S LINES BUT IT IS WELL DONE AND IT HAS ALOT OF LAYERS TO IT. I ENJOYED THE EXPERIENCE. CHERI
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Date: 1/8/2014 6:35:00 AM
thoughts were always in mind . Only I have penned them down.
Date: 1/7/2014 1:10:00 PM
- Yes .... where it comes from ... we wonder ... - A lovely writing poetry, Archana ! - I wish you good luck in the contest, hope you win. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/8/2014 6:33:00 AM
Thanks dear.
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