God and Woman

God And Woman

I did not want anything from The Almighty
Sacrificed untouchable realization
Which is symbol of myself
And dedicated emotions, silence.

I did not demand anything from the woman
Allowed her into the corner of my mind
Which is the center of bleeding
And presented my intuition.

The Almighty and the woman repeatedly call
Destruction in my lonely life
It's the ability to do more by them...


SANDIP GOSWAMI, INDIA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 6:21 PM
I have enjoyed wading through the stream of your conscienceness.
Chircop Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Congrats on your win big brother : )
Deschler Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 5:25 PM
A very interesting poem. Good work! Congratulations on your win, as well!
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 8:37 PM
congrats on your win, sandpip!
Oyewole Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 1:12 PM
A unique write! Congrats on the win!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:30 AM
- Hello Sandip, congratulations on your well written winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
Kayode Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Sandip.
Mehta Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:16 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, sandip
Walker  Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Nice, Sandip and welcome to Poetry Soup... Verlena
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February 23, 2014 at 7:13 AM
interesting, Sandip, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 6:26 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sandip- I choose your first written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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