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God and Me

I was running like a mad dog
And felt a feather touch on my back
I turned back and saw God smiling
" Hey, you're running too fast..
"Are you in a competition man ?"
"Who are you competing with?"
I had to stop to give God a space
Like friends we walked down the road.

Copyright © Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty | Year Posted 2015

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 4/7/2016 8:23:00 AM All together wonderful. Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 3/21/2015 9:05:00 AM Apt...the feather touch is consistent with the small voice...Love this write, Rajat. I'm guilty then, much like the one in your write, still in the rat race...Oh you are a good friend to remind...A 7. Hugs and smiles from the isles! :) Kim...PS. Gracias mi amigo!!! Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/21/2015 11:56:00 AM Dios te bendiga mi amigo dulce y encantadora ---your friend rajat

Monterey Sirak Date: 3/21/2015 8:18:00 AM Wonderful! It is so easy to get caught up in the race and forget why we are running. Love the image of a feather touch from God bringing us back to our senses. Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/21/2015 8:33:00 AM O Monterey I loved the interpretation. Do we give God a space in our life? We forget the most important thing. So sad Monterey. Love.God bless/ Rajat