God?

He's sailing through the mist
Hoping that God does exist
But if He's not 
Then he's been caught
And won't even know what he missed!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dvorkis Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 12:43 PM
this sounds like a limerick to me in case you felt like changing the form...your choice. I'm intrigued by the last three lines, He usually refers to God but I'm not sure what He's not is referring to. then I wonder who would catch the subject, the lowercase he. great piece though, I can see we think alike on the big G. thanks for sharing.
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Interesting work. Keep writing. Sara
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