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Form: Poi

A try of a lovely form of poem, POI introduced by Hilo Poet with a minimal word format.

The title will have three letters to form a word. It's a poem with 3 stanzas, each with 3 lines, and each line with 3 words. The rhyme scheme is: 1. aba 2. bcb 3. cac. The chosen title will be spelled out in the FIRST alphabet of the SECOND line in each stanza. 5. Words or phrases noticeably popular as being hyphenated are considered as a single word.

Poem written: May 14, 2024 11:23 a.m.

My mighty protector Guide and companion Mighty life’s director In every occasion Of my life Is an adoration Temptation is rife Daily prayers restore Love conquers strife

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/14/2024 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations Len.. You speak out well in this Form and poem.'

Len Gasun
Date: 7/25/2024 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so much belatedly for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Joe. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 6/23/2024 1:01:00 AM

Intro ''POI''-etry Contest Judged: 6/19/2024 9:23:00 AM Sponsored by: Hilo Poet Place 5 (out of 10 single w)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2024 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your faith-based winner. Way to go. He is a very present help in all ways if we only believe. Sara K

Len Gasun
Date: 6/23/2024 12:59:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. Congratulations too on your win or many wins. I'll come to read you soon. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/19/2024 7:54:00 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this God-exalting poem of yours. God bless you.

Len Gasun
Date: 6/23/2024 12:58:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. Congratulations as well on your many wins. I'll read you soon. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/19/2024 4:34:00 PM

Simply put, the goodness of God! Congrats!

Len Gasun
Date: 6/23/2024 12:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory comment my dear poet friend. God bless you always and your writings. Congrats as well in your many wins. I will come and visit you soon. Hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/19/2024 9:41:00 AM

Len: A blessed write of unfailing bliss, my friend. Aloha for your participation, William

Len Gasun
Date: 6/23/2024 12:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for your acknowledgment on my poem through my win my dear poet friend HP. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/14/2024 7:38:00 AM

WOW!!! What a wonderful write. "Love" this one. Sounds hard but you made it look easy to write. "Good Luck" if it is for a contest... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Len Gasun
Date: 5/14/2024 10:52:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest poet friend for reading my poi form poem. This is just a try. Thank you so much for loving it and your encouraging words as well as your best wishes. Have a blessed day writing too. God bless you always. Hugs