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Gobsmacked, Bamboozled and Confused

Gobsmacked, Bamboozled and Confused


I was gobsmacked, bamboozled and confused
when they showed me worn out crayons never unused

for the lines they were destined to stay within
were taken as a challenge - not a whim

as the fists that clutched the colors misunderstood
the concept of the lines - “for their own good”

strayed with the exuberance of youth
opened up a crayon kissing booth

mingled the sunrise with the moon
served breakfast at the height of midnight noon

gobsmacked, bamboozled and confused
the crayons wandered happily bemused

across a barren landscape of pure snow
trailing behind them life’s rainbow


©11/11/18


for – What Gobsmacks, Bamboozles and Confuses Me Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/11/2018 10:24:00 PM
Awesome , congratulations on your win...
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Date: 11/11/2018 4:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John. Well done.
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