Edward Ibeh Poet Cinquain

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Gobsmacked

It came
             quite unbidden.
           A cancer diagnosis,
    leaving the fitness enthusiast
                gobsmacked.
The doctor mouths "I'm sorry," as
        she's frozen in her chair;
           tears trickling down
                 her cheeks.


Let The Pens Flow - Butterfly Cinquain Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas 
Checked at howmanysyllables.com
Date written: 05/03/2020

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Beata Agustin May 4, 2020 at 6:14 PM Thanks for sharing this truth of poignant observation in your awesome poetic style. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-concluded contest. I'm honored; and likewise humbled by your uplifting comment. God bless you. Edward Ibeh May 4, 2020 at 6:21 PM You're quite welcome, Beata:-) Thanks for the lovely comments and visit! God bless you as well.

Kim Rodrigues May 4, 2020 at 2:14 PM You’ve done well! Life is not a given, no matter how good shape you think you’re in. The other chair reserved for the caregiver! Edward Ibeh May 4, 2020 at 3:56 PM Agreed! Thanks for the comments and visit, Kim:-)