Gobsmacked

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It came quite unbidden. A cancer diagnosis, leaving the fitness enthusiast gobsmacked. The doctor mouths "I'm sorry," as she's frozen in her chair; tears trickling down her cheeks. Let The Pens Flow - Butterfly Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas Checked at howmanysyllables.com Date written: 05/03/2020

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/4/2020 6:14:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this truth of poignant observation in your awesome poetic style. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-concluded contest. I'm honored; and likewise humbled by your uplifting comment. God bless you.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/4/2020 6:21:00 PM

You're quite welcome, Beata:-) Thanks for the lovely comments and visit! God bless you as well.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2020 2:14:00 PM

You’ve done well! Life is not a given, no matter how good shape you think you’re in. The other chair reserved for the caregiver!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/4/2020 3:56:00 PM

Agreed! Thanks for the comments and visit, Kim:-)