Goat's Climb

Goat's climb, fall short,

Eagle flaps, brought thought,

smoke naught, is taught.

Don Johnson 7-Aug-11
Dr.Ram Mehta's Contest Name    Than-Bauk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one this eve..I am not sure of its interpertation..Thanks for stopping by..You will have to let me know what this means..Sara
Johnson Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 6:07 PM
lots of us try but don't quite make it, Eagles flap flop flip n forth, Yul Brynner said don't smoke, naught.... lifes a bugger when ya caught, orright...
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 9:17 AM
this makes me think of some INdian at the top of a mountain doing smoke signals!! And the eagle bringing him some thought!!
Johnson Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 6:59 PM
subliminal message got ya hey, me rabbiting on some gives away (talking)
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Thanks for the entry, Don
Jones Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:44 PM
One of life's more difficult lessons for many of us....inhales and sighs... another good'n, Don Johnson!
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