Go To Sleep Please

Be quiet.
I'm trying to fall asleep.
Stop the disquiet.
I shouldn't need to count sheep.
I'm not interested
in what you might say.
You've been treated for what's inhibited.
You should be okay.
It's of no consequence to me
what you're wearing tomorrow.
Put something on with glee.
I refuse to live in your sorrow.
I'm tired of your fear.
A person shouldn't live this way.
Are you afraid to steer?
Will your direction ever sway?
You need to find the momentum
and flow with the one you love.
Be sure it's with them
and awake to the sun above.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 7:15 PM
From the picture, could be the sheep are part of the (disquiet) problem! lol. Maybe count stuffed animals instead... Here's to restful sleep! :) gw
Crabtree Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 7:27 PM
lol. You might be right, Gershon ;)
Downing  Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 9:24 PM
And here I am in the midnight hour reading away for sleep is far far away...LOL! Awesome poem, Angela :)
Crabtree Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Thank you, Akkina :)
Callus Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Lol....I hate having my sleep disturbed for some irrelevant thing, especially if it had already taken me a long time to fall asleep:) I know how you feel :) Regards // paul
Crabtree Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Paul. I have those moments, occasionally :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 4:20 PM
"I refuse to live in your sorrow. I'm tired of your fear." This says so much!
Crabtree Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 5:15 PM
Thank you, Caren :)
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 3:05 PM
It happens from time to time--great inspiration in your poem for the partner, Angela.
Crabtree Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 3:07 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate it :)
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 2:15 PM
Well done! I know what it is like, those nights unable to sleep. I hope all is well :)
Crabtree Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Everything's fine :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:41 PM
To have a partner that would not let me sleep!!! Maybe a good kick would help:) Just joking. Give him some whiskey to drown his sorrow. ~~
Crabtree Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:56 PM
lol
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