Go To Sleep Please

Be quiet.
I'm trying to fall asleep.
Stop the disquiet.
I shouldn't need to count sheep.
I'm not interested
in what you might say.
You've been treated for what's inhibited.
You should be okay.
It's of no consequence to me
what you're wearing tomorrow.
Put something on with glee.
I refuse to live in your sorrow.
I'm tired of your fear.
A person shouldn't live this way.
Are you afraid to steer?
Will your direction ever sway?
You need to find the momentum
and flow with the one you love.
Be sure it's with them
and awake to the sun above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/30/2020 7:15:00 PM
From the picture, could be the sheep are part of the (disquiet) problem! lol. Maybe count stuffed animals instead... Here's to restful sleep! :) gw
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/30/2020 7:27:00 PM
lol. You might be right, Gershon ;)
Date: 12/14/2020 9:24:00 PM
And here I am in the midnight hour reading away for sleep is far far away...LOL! Awesome poem, Angela :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/15/2020 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Akkina :)
Date: 12/14/2020 7:11:00 AM
Lol....I hate having my sleep disturbed for some irrelevant thing, especially if it had already taken me a long time to fall asleep:) I know how you feel :) Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/14/2020 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. I have those moments, occasionally :)
Date: 12/13/2020 4:20:00 PM
"I refuse to live in your sorrow. I'm tired of your fear." This says so much!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/13/2020 5:15:00 PM
Thank you, Caren :)
Date: 12/13/2020 3:05:00 PM
It happens from time to time--great inspiration in your poem for the partner, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/13/2020 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate it :)
Date: 12/13/2020 2:15:00 PM
Well done! I know what it is like, those nights unable to sleep. I hope all is well :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/13/2020 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Everything's fine :)
Date: 12/13/2020 12:41:00 PM
To have a partner that would not let me sleep!!! Maybe a good kick would help:) Just joking. Give him some whiskey to drown his sorrow. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/13/2020 12:56:00 PM
lol
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