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*The exciting comeback by the Red Sox - 4th game in the 2018 World Series against the Dodgers.

Game 4 in the World Series sure is something to talk about
In fact, such an exciting game, worth cheers and a shout
In the 5th a Red Sox close call hit to left, almost a home run
As the excitement increases on edge of the seat fun

The close game continues tied 0 – 0 to the 6th inning
Hits, catches, strikes, outs with no-one winning
Then, the dodger’s double and another hit take the lead
The dodger’s fight to win 1 – 0, now plant a seed

The Dodgers then hit a far one with another double
Now, bringing the Red Sox some looming trouble
Suddenly, the Dodgers smash a home run to left field
They take the lead 4 - 0 moving forward as they wield

The stadium is full with a massive rising crowd
In the west, they are cheering very loud
Into the 7th Red Sox fighting hard, bases are full
A home run to the right, pushes the score 4 – 3 like a bull

Their comeback continues in the 8th, another home run, 4 – 4
This is what watching the game is worth waiting for!
The red sox keep pushing forward with what seems an open door
Into the 9th, the Red Sox double, now 5 - 4, push ahead even more

Then, bases are loaded and there is a center field hit
No out is made, standing to cheer instead of sit
Now, 3 runs come in, 8 to 4, as the lead does increase
The Red Sox effort and energy, never does cease

They keep on going, with another hit 9 – 4 now
Then Dodgers come to bat and keep up the fight somehow
The Dodgers hit a home run bringing the score 9 - 6
Now, there are some nervous feelings in the mix

But, the Red Sox succeed with their staying ahead
With a catch in the outfield, an outstanding win before bed!
        	            -    GO SOX!   -

Heidi Sands

10/28/18

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/28/2018 4:15:00 PM

Another winner for you Heidi, and hopefully it will lead the Sox to be the ultimate winner in game 5. Don't think they can do it without you! Great play by play!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2018 4:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandra. It certainly has been exciting. That is nice of you to say...I hope my rooting for them helps! I look forward with hopes they will win it all! :)