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*The exciting comeback by the Red Sox - 4th game in the 2018 World Series against the Dodgers.

Game 4 in the World Series sure is something to talk about In fact, such an exciting game, worth cheers and a shout In the 5th a Red Sox close call hit to left, almost a home run As the excitement increases on edge of the seat fun The close game continues tied 0 – 0 to the 6th inning Hits, catches, strikes, outs with no-one winning Then, the dodger’s double and another hit take the lead The dodger’s fight to win 1 – 0, now plant a seed The Dodgers then hit a far one with another double Now, bringing the Red Sox some looming trouble Suddenly, the Dodgers smash a home run to left field They take the lead 4 - 0 moving forward as they wield The stadium is full with a massive rising crowd In the west, they are cheering very loud Into the 7th Red Sox fighting hard, bases are full A home run to the right, pushes the score 4 – 3 like a bull Their comeback continues in the 8th, another home run, 4 – 4 This is what watching the game is worth waiting for! The red sox keep pushing forward with what seems an open door Into the 9th, the Red Sox double, now 5 - 4, push ahead even more Then, bases are loaded and there is a center field hit No out is made, standing to cheer instead of sit Now, 3 runs come in, 8 to 4, as the lead does increase The Red Sox effort and energy, never does cease They keep on going, with another hit 9 – 4 now Then Dodgers come to bat and keep up the fight somehow The Dodgers hit a home run bringing the score 9 - 6 Now, there are some nervous feelings in the mix But, the Red Sox succeed with their staying ahead With a catch in the outfield, an outstanding win before bed! - GO SOX! - Heidi Sands 10/28/18

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Date: 10/28/2018 4:15:00 PM
Another winner for you Heidi, and hopefully it will lead the Sox to be the ultimate winner in game 5. Don't think they can do it without you! Great play by play!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/28/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra. It certainly has been exciting. That is nice of you to say...I hope my rooting for them helps! I look forward with hopes they will win it all! :)
Date: 10/28/2018 3:47:00 PM
Enjoyed reading the play by play..Go Red Sox!
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Date: 10/28/2018 4:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay! Go Sox! On again tonight :)
Date: 10/28/2018 10:39:00 AM
Glad your team won Heidi, now get to bed and catch up on your sleep lol. Tom.
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Date: 10/28/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Tom! LOL It's too bad I have trouble sleeping in the day :) The next game is tonight :)
Date: 10/28/2018 10:12:00 AM
A great comeback and an exciting game..Go Sox..
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Date: 10/28/2018 10:16:00 AM
Yes it certainly was! Thanks Joseph. GO SOX! :)

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