Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Go In Within

heart tranquil, mind discontent, we pause time
we are here, yet wish to be elsewhere; why
within void of silence, heart softly chimes
bliss vibrancy high, soul lets desires die
all that remains, is the divine sublime 

29-May-2021

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Paula Goldsmith June 3, 2021 at 9:35 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative write that makes one think. Have a blessed day.................. Unseeking Seeker June 3, 2021 at 7:45 PM Thank you, Paula!

Christuraj Alex June 2, 2021 at 10:42 AM Congratulations! Unseeking Seeker June 3, 2021 at 7:45 PM Thank you Chris! I haven’t gotten around to reading the other entries yet

Sam Kauffman June 2, 2021 at 9:11 AM "Divine" and "sublime" Seeker. Love the phrase "we pause time." With all of the artificial noise around us it takes many hours of accepting inner silence to consistently be in touch with the Divine. You have expressed that experience with perfection. Congratulations and blessings of divine silence to you. Unseeking Seeker June 2, 2021 at 9:25 AM Thank you, Sam!

Christuraj Alex May 30, 2021 at 10:24 PM Going within is, indeed, a difficult job. Your poems have that splendor of inviting humanity to try this difficult, all the same, enriching task. Unseeking Seeker May 30, 2021 at 10:51 PM We were born with this gift until the external environment hypnotised us, methinks

Sally Eslinger May 30, 2021 at 1:35 PM Yes. Truth. Bliss surpasses with the Divine. Amen. Blessed pen. Unseeking Seeker May 30, 2021 at 10:50 PM Thank you, Sally!

Victor Buhagiar May 29, 2021 at 7:28 AM There is contrast between heart and mind. I suppose this is some eastern concept. Unseeking Seeker May 30, 2021 at 10:49 PM Yet when head melds with heart, boundaries blur, don’t they?