Go In Within

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heart tranquil, mind discontent, we pause time we are here, yet wish to be elsewhere; why within void of silence, heart softly chimes bliss vibrancy high, soul lets desires die all that remains, is the divine sublime 29-May-2021 Bite size poem 3 poetry contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2021 9:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write that makes one think. Have a blessed day..................

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/3/2021 7:45:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/2/2021 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/3/2021 7:45:00 PM

Thank you Chris! I haven’t gotten around to reading the other entries yet

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/2/2021 9:11:00 AM

"Divine" and "sublime" Seeker. Love the phrase "we pause time." With all of the artificial noise around us it takes many hours of accepting inner silence to consistently be in touch with the Divine. You have expressed that experience with perfection. Congratulations and blessings of divine silence to you.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/2/2021 9:25:00 AM

Thank you, Sam!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/30/2021 10:24:00 PM

Going within is, indeed, a difficult job. Your poems have that splendor of inviting humanity to try this difficult, all the same, enriching task.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/30/2021 10:51:00 PM

We were born with this gift until the external environment hypnotised us, methinks