Go Gentle Into That Goodnight

GO   GENTLE  INTO   THAT   GOODNIGHT


Crunch of gravel - and a boat grounds its prow:
Cloud and wind hide its arrest
From the small cottage near the dark forest
With its candle almost snuffed out now.


The  moon of hunters,  full moon’s glare
Exposes the cottage on  the heath.
Settling his glinting knife blade redly  in its sheath,
He catches the candle in his stare.


Black-coated shoulders open door without fumble:
Slowly, hesitantly, with caution and care,
His wet-booted feet tread the stair,
Silent, upward,  without  creak or stumble.


The bedroom candle starts to gutter and dim.
Small blonde curls spread on fresh sheets clean.
The knife is at his side, its keen
Ready blade,  red and grim.


Blow out candle’s life, the  last flame.
His  shoulders bend over the blonde curl  -
Hand reaches down to the small face of the girl.
‘Goodnight daddy,’  she whispers his name;


She falls asleep to his kiss and hug.
He turns then back down the wooden stair:
Puts carefully on the workbench there
The fish-gutting knife in its sheath  snug.


He opens the  kitchen door of his seashore home,
And a  smiling woman turns and says,
‘You’re late again tonight  - but she stays
Waiting with the candle till you come.’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:40 PM
wow, what a concept, making us think he is gonna kill the sweet girl with the blonde curl! Very imaginative, Sydney. I really enjoyed the read!
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