Dan Helppi Poet Rhyme

Go For It All

If you are in love
Take stock of your actions.
Because words like dove
secure no affection.

Hold their hand
Kiss their face
Slide on a golden band
show they can't be replaced.

Love is for the warriors of doing
the disciples of yes
Take that chance, get going
Impress.

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Ana Espinola Collins December 23, 2014 at 11:59 AM Awesome poem Dan and bang on!!! Merry Xmas :) Ana

Timothy Hicks December 14, 2014 at 1:30 AM This reader here, is impressed. Each line packed a punch - no meandering around, but get straight to the point. You may know a person by their fruits - never stare at a person's mouth when they are speaking, but instead a person's feet when their walking. Great poem!

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2014 at 3:54 PM a good one for guys who can't get their act together . Reminds me of that cool song: put a ring on it!!!

Robert Lindley December 7, 2014 at 8:27 AM A very strong and wise write.. Packs a lot of wisdom and flows so well. Solid 7 on this write and was a fine read this morn. Having went for it ten years ago I salute both your poetry skills and your wisdom in this great write! Dan Helppi December 7, 2014 at 7:43 PM Glad to hear all you say, Many more happy years to you and your lovely wife.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis December 6, 2014 at 8:51 PM To the point, Dan That will do. To dare. to own, to woo How gentlemanly. I like the simplicity of an idea so framed to action. Thanks for your comment. Namaste! Dan Helppi December 7, 2014 at 7:41 PM Nice to hear from you Iris, thanks for your kindness.

Daver Austin December 4, 2014 at 2:09 PM "Dove" Hey, I knew a college mathematics prof who would use that one. He would have stuttered when he said it. Enjoyed mucho. daver Dan Helppi December 7, 2014 at 7:40 PM I am happy you enjoyed the poem daver.

Cherl Dunn December 3, 2014 at 6:18 PM Well written my young poet, i'm impressed for your youth this is a great wisdom of the heart that you've expressed, thank you for your comment on I beieve poem and yes I still believe in the big fellow mysef, cheri Dan Helppi December 7, 2014 at 7:39 PM Nice to hear from you Cherl. Thanks for the kind words.

Cona Adams December 3, 2014 at 3:59 PM I like it that you are a doer, not merely a dreamer. A stand up guy. Dan Helppi December 3, 2014 at 5:47 PM Thanks Cona.

Jan Allison December 3, 2014 at 2:29 AM What a tender romantic write - I particularly love the second stanza:-) hugs Jan xxx Dan Helppi December 3, 2014 at 7:56 AM Thank you for your kindness Jan.