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Go For It All

If you are in love Take stock of your actions. Because words like dove secure no affection. Hold their hand Kiss their face Slide on a golden band show they can't be replaced. Love is for the warriors of doing the disciples of yes Take that chance, get going Impress.

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Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 12/23/2014 11:59:00 AM

Awesome poem Dan and bang on!!! Merry Xmas :) Ana

Timothy Hicks

Date: 12/14/2014 1:30:00 AM

This reader here, is impressed. Each line packed a punch - no meandering around, but get straight to the point. You may know a person by their fruits - never stare at a person's mouth when they are speaking, but instead a person's feet when their walking. Great poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2014 3:54:00 PM

a good one for guys who can't get their act together . Reminds me of that cool song: put a ring on it!!!

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/7/2014 8:27:00 AM

A very strong and wise write.. Packs a lot of wisdom and flows so well. Solid 7 on this write and was a fine read this morn. Having went for it ten years ago I salute both your poetry skills and your wisdom in this great write!

Dan Helppi
Date: 12/7/2014 7:43:00 PM

Glad to hear all you say, Many more happy years to you and your lovely wife.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 12/6/2014 8:51:00 PM

To the point, Dan That will do. To dare. to own, to woo How gentlemanly. I like the simplicity of an idea so framed to action. Thanks for your comment. Namaste!

Dan Helppi
Date: 12/7/2014 7:41:00 PM

Nice to hear from you Iris, thanks for your kindness.

Daver Austin

Date: 12/4/2014 2:09:00 PM

"Dove" Hey, I knew a college mathematics prof who would use that one. He would have stuttered when he said it. Enjoyed mucho. daver

Dan Helppi
Date: 12/7/2014 7:40:00 PM

I am happy you enjoyed the poem daver.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/3/2014 6:18:00 PM

Well written my young poet, i'm impressed for your youth this is a great wisdom of the heart that you've expressed, thank you for your comment on I beieve poem and yes I still believe in the big fellow mysef, cheri

Dan Helppi
Date: 12/7/2014 7:39:00 PM

Nice to hear from you Cherl. Thanks for the kind words.

Cona Adams

Date: 12/3/2014 3:59:00 PM

I like it that you are a doer, not merely a dreamer. A stand up guy.

Dan Helppi
Date: 12/3/2014 5:47:00 PM

Thanks Cona.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/3/2014 2:29:00 AM

What a tender romantic write - I particularly love the second stanza:-) hugs Jan xxx

Dan Helppi
Date: 12/3/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for your kindness Jan.