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Open blue sky and fresh flowers around, Vibrant but enthralling that surround, Unchained, untied, nothing to bother, Much leisure and a long time to ponder. There are no paths to go back. Go back to the springtime of life. Hold on tight to encounter many more in life. Don't take the chance to lose your track. No wonder! It feels like giving up the charge. Responsibility and liability are undetachable. Walk bravely, no matter how kind or harsh, Head up and smile, as it is inevitable.

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Date: 10/1/2024 8:03:00 PM
I enjoy the creativity in this poem. Different lives have different paths. Well done.
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Judith Ao
Date: 11/1/2024 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for the appreciation.
Date: 9/27/2024 7:23:00 AM
Onward we march Judith. Nice to meet ya
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Judith Ao
Date: 9/28/2024 3:45:00 AM
Hello! Thank you for the comment. Same here....

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