Go Ahead Trust Me

trusting is easy

go on take a turn

its ok 

you won't get burned



you can do it 

if you try

come on now

and don't ask why



give a little here 

give a little there

give a little more

be open and share



but don't close your eyes

cause if you do

trust will walk

all over you too
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 12, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Such true words about trust, Jodie :) really enjoyed the short lines in this poem --btw there's a missing apostrophe in "won't" L4S1--hope this helps :) --nikko :)
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June 10, 2010 at 10:24 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Jodie. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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June 9, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Nice write,,enjoyed..p.d.
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June 9, 2010 at 3:11 PM
very true .... been there... great flow with your words... thanks for your kind comments also... Michael
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