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Glowing Gem


                a yellow lamp glows
                in front of a waterfall
                    a gem in the flow

12/27/23

Heidi Sands

5-7-5

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Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2023

beautifullightwaterhaiku

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January 19, 2024 at 6:59 AM

That's a great write. I hope you are doing great. Cheers

January 19, 2024 at 7:58 AM

Thank you very much. Cheers :)

December 28, 2023 at 6:34 PM

I like the last line of your haiku Heidi,Nicely done

December 28, 2023 at 6:56 PM

Thank you Joseph. It is nice to hear that. Happy evening :)

Paula Goldsmith

December 28, 2023 at 12:54 PM

I loved reading your lovely Haiku write. "Happy New Year 2024" .................

December 28, 2023 at 1:00 PM

That is great to hear . Thank you Paula. Happy New Year! :)

Hilda Greenhough

December 28, 2023 at 7:39 AM

I can see it. You brought beauty from a lamp into the words of a poem. I enjoy your talent.

December 28, 2023 at 7:45 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Hilda. I am happy to hear that :)

December 28, 2023 at 6:56 AM

Stunning imagery.. really captured the image here dear Heidi..

December 28, 2023 at 7:17 AM

Thank you Silent One :)

December 28, 2023 at 6:03 AM

I like how you captured the moment of gem in the flow. Lovely haiku, Heidi.

December 28, 2023 at 6:29 AM

Thank you Vijay. I appreciate the feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)

December 27, 2023 at 9:05 PM

A lovely image Heidi, I can see the warm glow and hear the soothing sound of running water. Tom

December 28, 2023 at 6:28 AM

Thank you Tom. That is nice to hear. I hope you have a great day :)

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