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Glowing Gem

a yellow lamp glows in front of a waterfall a gem in the flow 12/27/23 Heidi Sands 5-7-5 (C)opyright

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/19/2024 6:59:00 AM

That's a great write. I hope you are doing great. Cheers

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2024 7:58:00 AM

Thank you very much. Cheers :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/28/2023 6:34:00 PM

I like the last line of your haiku Heidi,Nicely done

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 6:56:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. It is nice to hear that. Happy evening :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2023 12:54:00 PM

I loved reading your lovely Haiku write. "Happy New Year 2024" .................

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 1:00:00 PM

That is great to hear . Thank you Paula. Happy New Year! :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/28/2023 7:39:00 AM

I can see it. You brought beauty from a lamp into the words of a poem. I enjoy your talent.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 7:45:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Hilda. I am happy to hear that :)

Silent One

Date: 12/28/2023 6:56:00 AM

Stunning imagery.. really captured the image here dear Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Silent One :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/28/2023 6:03:00 AM

I like how you captured the moment of gem in the flow. Lovely haiku, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I appreciate the feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/27/2023 9:05:00 PM

A lovely image Heidi, I can see the warm glow and hear the soothing sound of running water. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2023 6:28:00 AM

Thank you Tom. That is nice to hear. I hope you have a great day :)