L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Glow of the Universe

Warm spring sun talking to the trees,
Bringing the glow of the universe nigh
On the wings of a sweet-smelling breeze,
Warm spring sun talking to the trees
Bringing ol’ man winter to his knees,
Growing season eliciting a hopeful sigh
Warm spring sun talking to the trees,
Bringing the glow of the universe nigh.

written March 5, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger March 6, 2022 at 11:51 PM I crown you King of the Triolets now. L Milton Hankins March 7, 2022 at 8:59 AM Oh, I love them myself. They are so easy to write. Well, I think so, anyway.

Indiana Shaw March 5, 2022 at 2:23 PM I love all the seasons me, but, its always nice when ol' man winter takes a rest, just loved the way your spring puts him to bed, a lovely uplifting Triolet, Milton . . . : ) L Milton Hankins March 7, 2022 at 8:59 AM Thanks so much, Indiana. I find the form works well for Spring poems. Simple, direct imagery.

Tom Cunningham March 5, 2022 at 11:34 AM Ol' man winter certainly won't be missed. Tom L Milton Hankins March 5, 2022 at 12:40 PM You can say that again, Tom. He sure won't be around here. It's a beautiful spring day here, but I know there is colder weather to come. March is tricky!

Jeff Kyser March 5, 2022 at 11:15 AM I hope it is as nice outside as your poem, Milt! Gotta get away from the computer and outside myself! L Milton Hankins March 5, 2022 at 12:41 PM I'm about ready to get outside, too. This is a perfect day!