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Glow

...for D.H. Lawrence Sit by the fire my love and let its flare caress you softly, soft as the suggestion of my touch fluttering gently on your skin yet slowly fading, as frail embers quit their glow and sputter cold. My passion shall o'ercome flame's waning appetite and keep you warm, till stars rescind their luster to the dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/8/2013 3:53:00 PM
this poem is fantastic. I love when you write romantically like this. Came all the way back to your first poems to see one and found this gem. Also wanted to say that I hope to see you posting new poetry soon. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/25/2009 5:06:00 AM
Whew! Gently expressed, great feature poem! Well done! Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/21/2009 8:57:00 AM
Congrats Keith on "Glow" being featured. Sort of reminds me of an old Irish folk song "After all these Years." Vince
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Date: 4/20/2009 9:12:00 PM
Keith, Congrats on having your poem featured!
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Date: 4/20/2009 4:34:00 PM
Congrats on your excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/20/2009 2:33:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Keith.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:00:00 PM
Keith, nice work and congrats on being featured this week..Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 4:57:00 PM
Truly beautiful ...well deserving to be read here in the featured poems, where my eyes can read your words. ~ Congratulations~ Carrie
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Date: 4/19/2009 2:31:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:35:00 PM
Wow,another beautiful piece of art featured this week. Congratulations. Mine is also featured. Ernilando
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Date: 4/19/2009 12:54:00 PM
Another beautiful poem Keith! Congratulations on being featured!
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:57:00 AM
Keith I reckon that was 3 months well spent - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 3/1/2009 12:13:00 PM
Thanks... this one took about three months to get right. Thanks for your kind words...
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