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Glorious Sunrise

Reprise the vision of a resplendent dawn each day
as sunrise brushes the horizon with a pastel array,
embellishing morning skies in lavender, pink and blue.
Such divine beauty glorifies what words cannot convey
I stare with mesmerized eyes, awestruck by the view.



October 29, 2021     
Something Beautiful 5 Line Rhyme Contest
Sponsored by Charlie Messina

Copyright © Jenna Logan | Year Posted 2021

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Krish Radhakrishna Date: 11/13/2021 12:08:00 AM Jenna, I love lavender and the sky and the sea add to the beauty! Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/11/2021 5:14:00 AM This is exquisite poetry, Jenna, very worthy of the top honours, congratulations:) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/11/2021 2:28:00 PM I am truly honored by your thoughts. Thank you, Jo.

Charles Messina Date: 11/11/2021 2:16:00 AM Jenna, you have painted such a beautiful picture with ypur words. Now that I can see the photo, it's exactly how I pictured it. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs Charlie Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/11/2021 3:32:00 AM Charlie, I am so pleased by your news! Thank you so very much for finding it worthy of your award. Hugs back for you.

David Kavanagh Date: 10/30/2021 5:34:00 AM Oh now! This is pure unadulterated poetry Jenna, you've captured these fleeting moments that appear in our morning skies, awestruck indeed imagining your painted verse, cheers David Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/31/2021 8:28:00 AM I'm flattered, David. It's my favorite time of day. Sadly, most never witness the beauty. Thanks so much.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/30/2021 1:17:00 AM Divine. I need say no more. :) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/31/2021 8:27:00 AM That is more than enough. Thanks, Victor.

Harry Horsman Date: 10/29/2021 10:17:00 PM 'Such divine beauty glorifies what words cannot convey.' Yours do Jenna Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/31/2021 8:24:00 AM Thank you for your lovely words, Harry. I'm grateful for them.

L Milton Hankins Date: 10/29/2021 2:47:00 PM Perfect! You have painted the scene with words, and it is gorgeous! Best wishes in this contest. After reading yours, I guess I should just withdraw mine! LOL Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/29/2021 4:04:00 PM Thank you for such lovely comments. Never withdraw. You posted it, so you must be happy with it.

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/29/2021 2:09:00 PM You captured the sunrise well Jenna, a sight I never get tired of seeing. Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/29/2021 2:40:00 PM You and I agree on the beauty of sunrises, Tom. Most people are enamored by sunsets, but the early morning skies are much more beautiful, I think partly because it's the beginning of something rather than an ending. You know I value your thoughts...thanks!

Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2021 2:01:00 PM This is so beautiful in every sense of the word Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/29/2021 2:39:00 PM Thank you for such lovely remarks, Jan. I'm kind of partial to the beautiful photograph I found to accompany my lines. This is a contest that I enjoyed writing for, and win or lose, I'm happy with the result.