Poesy Relish Poet Sijo

Glorious Field Visual 3

A fine day with flowers blooming around, a bench to rest 

but the storm lurks at the far end of the sky unrest, a trial

the reward is the dawning of a clear new day, blessed

© Nadiya (3 Feb '15)

*(not for the contest)

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 5, 2015 at 8:30 AM beautiful.. :) Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 8:42 AM Thank you very much Olive...

Kash Poet February 4, 2015 at 9:48 PM Beautiful imagery.Please note that a Sijo should be unrhymed.Best wishes. Poesy Relish February 4, 2015 at 10:07 PM Thank you very much for pointing out my mistake... regards,nad!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 4, 2015 at 2:56 AM Great Nad, god bless.Love>rajat Poesy Relish February 4, 2015 at 4:02 AM Thank you very much Rajat

Dr. Vandana Sharma February 4, 2015 at 1:23 AM a clear sky with beautiful flowers and a bench to enjoy...........all good things of life are simple! Poesy Relish February 4, 2015 at 1:41 AM Yes indeed Vandana:)... we gain happiness from simplest of things.. thanks for the read... lov, nad!

Charmaine Chircop February 3, 2015 at 4:36 PM Fantasti!What a beauty this is !!!: ) Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 8:45 PM Thank you very much Charma... happy that you liked my pen... nad!

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 1:08 PM such wonderful imagery Nadiya and a stunning new avatar too:-) Hugs Jan xx a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 1:15 PM Thank you Jan for your supportive comments... lov, nad!