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Glorious Blossom

T hey yawn in spring’s rain beneath the soaked earth U nending green shoots peek, as to feel soft breeze L oving the taste and feel of priceless, liquid gold I nstant relief for thirsty bulbs that P ant with excitement now awaken from sleep and S wiftly imbibe for that first glorious blossom

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2013 10:54:00 AM

Hello Annalise, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/13/2011 3:31:00 PM

Wow this is a beautiful Acrostic PB...I love tulips!!! JAM

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 3/12/2011 11:50:00 AM

Wow, this is splendid, your acroustic flows and...blossoms just like the tulips. Great flow of words Laughs. Thanks for you wonderful words of encouragement Annalise. Stay great n God bless. Peace n love, Adeleke

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/12/2011 5:53:00 AM

Great description of spring, Annalise! Soon even the tulips will bloom! Enjoyed the read! Love, Gert

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/11/2011 1:57:00 PM

A bright spring feeling shines from this tulip and from your work... I love your Poetry...love Michael

John Freeman

Date: 3/11/2011 7:49:00 AM

A difficult but beautiful Acrostic ramification of the Tulips, Annalise. Thank you for your comment. So many distractions when living outside the spirit. Absolutely Annalise, it is a personal decision, one well worth making for the rewards are forthcoming even in our present life. The rewards could be compared to the difference between sailing through one's life, or spinning in the marshes. Agape, Moses

James Rasmusson

Date: 3/11/2011 5:51:00 AM

Hi Annalse, so glad you enjoyed my "Van Buren Station" and thanks for the encouaging words. There's no place like Chitown. I lived there for seven years and these days make the 2.5 hour trip from my home in Holland MI many times a year. Speaking of Holland, I was glad to see and delighted by your "Glorious Blossom" poem as we have our famous Tulip Festival in a few weeks here in Holland. Hugs, ~Jim MeanderthalMan

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2011 4:52:00 AM

Lovely imagery Annalise and a beautiful expression of a favorite flower.. the red and pink ones are fantastic and my dear Mom loved the yellow ... expressive Acrostic to impress the lovers of Spring..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/11/2011 3:29:00 AM

a radiant oiece that could win in any tourney, anna... how creative! :) huggs, nette

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/10/2011 6:33:00 PM

One of my favorite flowers, Annalise. Beautiful piece. You brought the Tulip to life with your words. Kudos to you. Thanks for your gracious comments. luv Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 1:49:00 PM

Terrific description of one of spring's earliest bloomers, Annalise. I love the way you bring them to life, having them yawn in spring's rain, and then tasting and feeling the sun and rain. I know you've been busy, Sweetie. Thanks for taking the time to stop by. Missed you! Love, Carolyn

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/10/2011 12:38:00 PM

enjoyed the bright aspects here Audrey.

John Rhinem

Date: 3/10/2011 12:16:00 PM

*Smile ~ "Ow 'Beautiful Annalise,' Please Forgive Myself for Thinking That 'Precious Jimmy' Was A Woman But, I Know Now of My Mistakenness Yet, One Thing That I Have Never Been Mistaken About Is 'Your *Astonishing Beauty!!!'" ~ "Wonderful Painting My Dear, 'Filled With *Beautiful Light'" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John!:)* ~

Emma Mantle

Date: 3/10/2011 11:25:00 AM

A great Acrostic. Tulips are my favorite flower, so i love this! Best wishes Em :)