Gloom Power

Gloom Power


When I opened fast shut mind
I respected community of the blind.
They achieved such a rare feat;
Mostly these guys never cheat!
Though engulfed in eternal gloom
They stir with skill in the room!
With amble time to fret and sire,
They sustain unbroken desire.
To acumen, prowess and amity
Is what they turned their calamity!


JM

20th January 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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That Archaic Poet Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Just wondering of you meant "amble" or "ample"? Liked this, JM :)
Matose Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Thanks buddy. Your comment is great. Friend, JM
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