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Juicy, ripe cherries, still on the jade green trees, In vibrant, orange sunshine, glinting at summer. Blackberries winking, saffron noon hour of ease, When rose strewn seconds, seem lost in slumber. Fragrant, purple plums gleam hotly, very coveted, Lustrous, wild raspberries, deeply red and purple, Ruby red apples aglow, like fiery sun plummeted, Until all are lost in darkness, 'neath stars eternal. Written on 3/20/2023 For: A STRAND NO 1201 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/7/2023 7:42:00 PM

Yummy fruit salad of poetic delights Evelyn! Congratulations on your top win with this delicious rainbow! Your images are so vivid!! Now I want a fruit salad! So happy for your win! Easter blessings of joy to you!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/7/2023 9:20:00 PM

Thank you so very much for the happy thoughts, Sam. Your comments are heartwarming. I hope your Easter is wonderful, too, my friend. :)

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 3/23/2023 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win , Evelyn Your writting is correct.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/24/2023 12:13:00 AM

Your gracious words of congratulations are very much appreciated. :)

Kabutha Paul Hempstone

Date: 3/23/2023 4:27:00 AM

Your poem is a delightful celebration of nature's bounty, filled with vivid imagery and evocative language. The way you capture the colors and sensations of summer fruits is truly enchanting, and your closing lines about the stars lend a sense of timelessness to the piece. Well done and Congratulations on winning the contest!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/23/2023 11:33:00 AM

Thank you for the pleasure of your inspiring words of congratulations, Kabutha. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this work. Hope your day is nice. :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/22/2023 8:08:00 PM

"lost in slumber", "Until all are lost in darkness" - Indeed, very beautiful, scenic, with great truth. Congratulations!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2023 8:36:00 PM

Thank you for your heartwarming words of congratulations, Christuraj. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/22/2023 8:04:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win, Evelyn. Hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2023 8:34:00 PM

Thank you for your warm congratulations, my friend. Hugs. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/22/2023 7:44:00 PM

Wonderful, Evelyn, congratulations:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2023 8:32:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Jo. :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/22/2023 3:56:00 PM

Evelyn, love the imagery, I can smell the fruit, well penned, congratulations on your trophy win!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2023 4:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for your warm words of congratulations, Tania. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/22/2023 11:28:00 AM

A colorful write and mixed fruit. Let's eat!!! Have a fun day writing away................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2023 4:01:00 PM

Thank you for the happy thoughts, Paula. Enjoy your evening. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2023 9:22:00 AM

What a colorful poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/22/2023 10:52:00 AM

Thanks so much for your thoughts. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/21/2023 6:33:00 AM

This is a tasty one, Evelyn. Love the vibrant colors. Very nice!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2023 10:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for your gratifying response.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/21/2023 5:56:00 AM

Evelyn, I like this vibrant poem, and the illustration that goes along with it is just beautiful. As well as the red, crunchy apple picture.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2023 10:18:00 AM

I appreciate your warm remarks, Lasaad. Blessings :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/21/2023 1:09:00 AM

just wonderful, i would like to taste all that beautifully written have a nice day evelyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2023 10:16:00 AM

Thank you so much, Yann. You have a nice day, too. :)

Deb M

Date: 3/20/2023 11:37:00 PM

Evelyn l love this brightpoem and the picture is perfect for it! I want a red crispy apple now! Ha….Debx

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2023 10:15:00 AM

Your lovely remarks are very much appreciated, Deb. :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/20/2023 10:30:00 PM

My, I am hungry for some fresh delicious fruit all of a sudden! A scrumptious poem, I can almost smell the scents of the fruit <3 :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/21/2023 10:13:00 AM

Thank you for the delight of your comments, BJ. Hugs and blessings. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/20/2023 7:19:00 PM

Amazing, and even a tad eerie that all those vibrant colors are sitting there in the dark all night. It's interesting to think about; don't know quite what to make of it. Thanks for providing the 'food' for thought, Evelyn!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/20/2023 7:28:00 PM

Unfortunately, like fruits, even the sun gets tired of shining. :D Thank you so much for your comment.